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by Capitalist

person Mewling
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Gasps* An update!

Wonderful, as always. But I wonder where the plot is... I mean, wouldn't they be trying to escape...?

So I suppose this must be more a character romance development story...

(but what the hell is Ai no Kusabi?)
person Hisoka Kurosaki
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm so glad you finally updated. I've never enjoyed a fanfic this much! lol. Anyhoo, I saw the conncection to Ai no Kusabi recently( I got the DVD over Christmas and thrououghly enjoyed it might I add) And now I love this story even more. I really appreciate your writting and hope you continue to keep the awesome work.
person PockyFille
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! It updates! i'd nearly given up on this updating again. * total sucker for fics with actual plot*
Can ralen get beat up more? please? * makes big puppy eyes*
person inuyasha nut
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pls do so again soon. pls!!!!!!!!!!!
person Aoi
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-taps her cheeks lightly to see this if this is a dream-

...

-pinches herself-

...

Oh my goodness... It's not a dream... it's... a real... decent... fanfiction...

Excuse me while I slowly bask in the glory that is this story.

[insert moment here]

-cough- Sorry about the outburst. Nonetheless, this fanfiction is astounding. The cream of the crop, the diamond in the rough, and so on. I'm amazed how well you sculpted the plot and how you wove your dazzling writing skills around the characters of Card Captor Sakura and managed to result in an intricate story that just screams near-perfection. I can't deny that your yaoi moments certainly aren't my most favorite but the subtle feelings between Sakura and Syaoran is just pure euphoria. My cynical mind pines for Ralen to do something to Sakura (that collar needs some change), I must stay away from those non-consensual stories... Then there'd be a good enough reason to decapitate, if not castrate, blondie boy. But then again, I appreciate your story for what it is. No need to heed the insignificant rants of this reviewer. Carry on with your life. I'll be happy that you even glanced at this pitiful review.
person Aleanach
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must congratulate you on a story truly well written. However even though I was impatient for this chapter to finish, I understand the difficulty of posting even a chapter during the holiday seasons. I shall wait impatiently for the next chapter to come out. Though I am hesitant to admit it, I love how Yue is portrayed in this story, allowing him to feel without losing the basic of his true character.
person Mizu
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember what name I used last time..maybe it was this one.. I've got a few..

Another excellent chapter though! However..I have no idea what you're referencing to ^_^; The name doesn't sound familiar to me..

Yes, I did get Disney fuzzies. <3 But...oh well. I guess what happened was forseen. Heh. Yes, holidays are quite hecktick. So that's okay. But I hope the next update is soon too. I'm looking forward to it!
person MILHARU
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O MY GOD!!!!! POOR TOUYA!!!! 20!!!!! AND HIS CUTE BUTT, POOR TOUYA'S BUTT, I WAS SO HAPPY WITH THEIR RELATION IN CHAPS 19,!!!! PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! MAKE YUE HEAL THE POOR TOUYA!!!!!!!

AND UPDATE SOON!!!!
person Chibineko69
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD!!! I had a feeling that this would happen between Touya and Ralen...this chapter was so good that i couldn't stop reading it!! Please don;t take so long next time..we're all in love with this story!!!! (Oh, btw im an author here, so if you wanna e-mail me click on CHIBINEKO69 k?)
person ME!
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fah! Screw aff.net! My email is AcColeman87@aol.com. Any who....this won't end like Ai no Kusabi will it? I kind of want them to live...And yes, major ness on the Disney fuzzies. And I actually think that Pleasure Slave is more a la Beauty and the Beast than Ai no Kusabi. Why? Because we all know that Yue is indeed THE BEAST! lol Seriously, anyone who wealds a whip with that much sex appeal is a beast in my ook anyday of the week. Looking foreword to the next chapter emensly. ( Funnny story, when I saw that you had updated I started to do this little happy dance and my boyfriend walked right in on it. I'm never going to be able to live it down but MAn was it worth it)

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