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by Kitaniru

person lily
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!! SUGURU AND RYU!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE BOTH OF THEM AND LOVE THEM EVEN MORE TOGETHER!!!!!!! i know this story hasn\'t been updated for a while, but please continue it!!!!!! i love su and ryu together and most of my gravi fics are based on them!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!! can you email me too and tell me if you do? i\'d really love it!!!!!!!1 bye byes!!!!!!
person chibi hentai
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this looks like a very good story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter. one thing though, and please please please don\'t take this as a flame or insult, but i think Suguru was a bit out of character. he wants to step out of seguchi\'s shadow so i don\'t think he would have been so eager to take him up on the offer. that was the only thing i found weird. but other then that great story and hope you end up updating.

ja ne
person Jess
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aahaha!
When you click the link, it says "Review when you least expect it" na no da!
Veddy veddy omoroshiiii <3
So, very sparkly. I liked it. Methinks it will be very happy if you add some Seguchi*Eiri in there too, yesyes :D
~Jesschan ^_^
person Jess
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neeeeee, I don't think all of my review showed up.
It said; I want the Tohma x Yuki, too.
And that the story was shiny shiny shiny.
~Jess
person K-Bob
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing. Update update update! Or I will eat you children.... or worse, I'll eat Sakuma-san! Bwahaha >:)


...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update.

I say pe bue but I mean or else.....
person Tsuki Seishin
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Very well written...I love it!! ^__^ Please write more ^___^
person Chirpy
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pair! Can't wait to see how you develop this between Ryu and Suguru! =) Loved the 1st chap!
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept and the plot here.

I have seen RyuichixSuguru, but not like this.

I like the idea of him filling in for Tohma and I wonder how you're going to have Suguru deal with being compared to Tohma.

One thing though, I think when he's not in a professional setting, Suguru might call Tohma just plain 'Tohma.' But, I'm not sure about that either.

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