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for Shine

by LadyShiva

person Kitty Kamen
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg new chapter! *dances with glee* Your writting is so sexy, with just the right amount of angst. I can't wait for promised smoochies!!
person danielle
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story keep writing
person soulraven
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is realy good. Please keep working on it. 8D
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reveiwes guys! Chapter 2 is now going to be..um well, it's going to be at the end now. So i'm in the process of writing chapter 2, again? Something like that. Don't worry. Updates WILL be made.
person silverrose
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far. I hope the second chapter will be up soon. Can't wait to read it. It's nice to see someone bring out Alucard's softer siot tot that there's anything wrong with his harder side.)
Silverrose
person Star Kaliya
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow allyally like this story so far! Plz update soon ok?
person mistress_io
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There's nothing in the world i love more then a good A/S fic. This one has all the making of one! I simply love the way you switch back and forth between the two, having them sort of relive the same events thru their own eyes. It was incredibly refreshing some of the little touches you added in as well. Things like the diffrences in speak patternsd thd the fact that they were almost answering each others questions. I liked also the recuring things that you kept throughout. Things like Seras refered to Anderson's sword as a blessed blade, and Alucard called it a cursed one. its neat the way you paint them as two sides of the same sword. Oh and i think it's cute how Alucard is trying to act like a bastard, and pretend he dosnt care. poor Seras! Does she know how to pick em. Btw, love the idea of Seras cleaning her master's face. Woot! Write more soon!
person Gin Ryu
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A nice start, very well done. I like your flowing style of writing, and the way you switch from one character to another. Not to mention some of adj adjectives are great. Update with lemony goodness soon!

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