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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thought this was excellent - not everyone gets a happy ending --- Well done.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Just brilliant.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic back in Fanfiction.net, so I was overjoyed to see you move it here. There are pleanty of people who love dark fics, myself included. There were a few spelling errors, but nothing that made the fic unreadable. I for one would love to see a follow-up. Here\'s hoping we see more from you soon.
Jayman
Jayman
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Frankly, I was expecting the bracelet to be destroyed, and all the stolen energy to come shooting out back the original owners. But that's what follow ons are for, right? I mean, this ending is kind of a downer, what with the whole world changed like that. Well, your call, I suppose...
Scorpinac
Scorpinac
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the plot, very cool. Enough to ignore my pet peeve, which is punctuation and grammar usage. Sorry, no offense, just kinda irks me. But don't let that take anything away from you, I'm looking forward to seeing another Twisted story soon.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the plot, very cool. Enough to ignore my pet peeve, which is punctuation and grammar usage. Sorry, no offense, just kinda irks me. But don't let that take anything away from you, I'm looking forward to seeing another Twisted story soon.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a great story. It was dark, but I loved the moral ending. Great JOB!!!