rate_review Reviews

love the title. and the story is good too. i'm going to look for more of your work.

^_^ This was a great fic! It really was! Heh heh...I don\'t think I can look at Sanzo and Gojyo the same! Heh heh...This was good...Tee hee! ^_^ Until next time! ^_^

cool~
i like your story.
i love gojyo and sanzo. ;p

Nice short fic. Great punchline. Dragged on a bit (like my lit teacher always says, cut the clutter) but beautiful language and great imagery. Keep up the good work!

Gojyo/Sanzo has to be one of the most naughtiest pairings out there, probably because of the complete physicality of it - they hate each other so much, but that's what makes the sex so hot! XD! I really liked Gojyo's characterization on this, and his musings - very human and quite insightful. I've got to look at more you're read!

I only want to make one minor crit, that I think will work for you benefit - halfway through the story you switched from first person to third and then back to first. In the paragraph that begins "On the other hand, if Sanzo had never become a monk..." Gojyo is referred to as "Gojyo," instead of as "I." The paragraph following it does the same thing, and then the story switches back to first person again. It's an easy mistake to make (hell, I'm too chicken-shit to write a story from first person ely Bly BECAUSE of that reason ^_~), and an easy one to fix. ^-^

More Saiyuki, more! <3!

XD I want that on a bumber sticker!!!!