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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe, great! i like tohma the meddling bastard!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. Cute! I loved this piece of writing!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man, I couldn\'t stop laughing when Shuichi said he was gonna sleep on the couch. That definitely put a spin on the perspective of how their relationship goes. Great job!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. what was so cute and hot! I love the note from Tohma at the end. .I can *SO* see him standing there watching and listening.. he\'s so pervy! thanks for posting!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the idea of Yuki ahd Shuichi having sex in (what they thought) was an unused hallway! Ummmmm...erotic!
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I applaude your first lemon. Very good, please do keep on writing, they are most enjoyable ^__~ no i dont talk like that : P
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome, awesome fic ^^ i'll be reading more of yours!
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ i liked this fanfic! xD Poor Suichi...or poor yuki...or...ya... well anyways i loved this fanfic! ^^
~So says the Dragon~
~So says the Dragon~
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely wonderful. The hallway of all places. It seems that Yuki might have planned this all along. You kept everyone in character and expressed what went on beneath the surface. You even get that Yuki doesn't like cowardice, even when it comes to hiding his and Shuichi's relationship. The fact that the watcher was Tohma instead of Hiro was a pleasant surprise. The dialog was excellent. The note at the end was a very cute addition. You have talent! Can't wait to read more of your fics.
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god, i loved this! it was funny and sexy at the same time! i absolutely loved it! one of my fav gravitation fics!!