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by Salmon

person Chirella
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Especially the part about the couch at the end. LOL Great job!
person Patosan (not signed in -__-)
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It could have had more going for it, but I really liked how you depicted the Tohma-Eiri-shuichi situation on this one. The note on Suichi's pants with the order not to sleep on the couch did the whole fic for me. Nice piece :D
person Christina
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! I want more!
person Kiyoshi
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I loved this fic! Aw jeez, there's just something about a shy Shuichi that always makes me...um.*clears throat* ^^;
Anyways!! Great fic! plz make more like these! XD
person Shikijou
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this so much, a cute little fluff fic for a late night. X3
Furniture never gets the respect they deserve.
person KD
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum... I would love to imagine Yuki doing that to Shu-chan in the anime! Love your work!
person Jezibela
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, For a PWP, it's well written. Although, since I'm a format freak, it kind of bothers me that there aren't any distinct breaks in paragraphs, so it seems a bit straining to read it, but then again, the chapters are short so that resolves that problem. ^.^

Keep on truckin', it's going great!
person Jezibela
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I forgot to say, that I hope to see more FanFic's from you soon!
person anonymous reader
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done PWP. It was much enjoyed. It entertains the audience with a lovely lemon. But, it is true, maybe you can work out some fttintting to make it easier to read. Well, I can't wait to check out your next fiction! Good luck!
person clarichan
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am too to to sign in as always..lol

I really loved this fic lol..i thought it was pretty funny and cute....please do continue writing :D

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