rate_review Reviews

very nice, but I didn't really understood the end. They were in a bathroom for marron to get changed and then they are suddenly in gateaus's bed cudelling up?

I think the end was not so good. the climax was missing. You just kept asking: And? What will happen next? Where is the plot?
But I love your style! it's very beautyful! Just consider developing the plot a little further the next time!
I'm looking forward t that!

OMG, this can\'t end here! It was just getting good....! Okay, okay, this was a lovely story, I personally thought it was sweet, tangy, and fuzzy! Marron and Gateau are such a sweet couple, and you made it extra special! You\'re writing technique is very good, and flows smoothly with every idea! please continue on with your fiction, i would be more than happy if you would! ;)
Awesome Job!
~Kira

*nosebleed* hehe... soooo sweet! pationet yet without the \"lets rip our cloths of here and now even though i barley know u!\" u can just feel the blossoms of love, and there is definetly the nosebleed effect yet it doesn\'t go too far! beatuiful job! though the part where marron is looking through the window kind of freaked me out... (i love horror flicks... so ya! lol!) i hope u write more!!! i want to see how much the relationship will blossom!!!