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by RinoaRed

person KAJ
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbearably cool! It just...kept getting better and better as it went along...the wording, the actions...and therefore the visuals. Man, if I\'d have paid to read this, I definitely would have gotten my money\'s worth. (If you think Tatsumi\'s bad with frugality, you ain\'t seen the worst of it. :P) The ending rocked, and the beginning? Well, let\'s just say the fourth paragraph (you know, the one about the Watari and the cake) is worthy of framing and being hung on my wall. Latahs!
(LLB!)
kaj
person Jade
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was Hot! LOl. Threesome should be done more often! It's more fun. Geez, arne't I perverted... ::SHAKES her head::
person Jade
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's me again! I'd just like to say yaoi has NEVER been THIS good! Looking forward to ur homepage!
person My_Neko_Kyou
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....
I\'ve got one thing to say:
May I call you Author-sama? (*worships*)
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pant* OH MY GOD. I haven\'t read anything this hot in *ages*! I love the threesome, but the bit where Tsuzuki pretends to be Tatsumi at first...that was a stroke of genius. An utter stroke of genius. No other way to describe it. Loved it!!
person Ran
schedule March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was so cool!! I read the first part before in ff.net *snorts* But I\'m really glad that\'s wasn\'t all I like the way you gave a feeling of closure that even though would be great, does not leave the need of a sequel ^^ Great fic!
person panatlantic
schedule March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. i mean really... wow O_o!! in a good way (damn i\'m such a voyeur right now... in a good way! n_nU (is there a good way???))
person Sayori
schedule March 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAL!* I haven\'t read a better fic yet! You are awesome! The fic was awesome!! XDDDDDDDDD

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