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see not even the chocolate will stop sanzo

God, I love your work. Good Enough was a masterpiece of Saiyuki fanfiction and Chocolate just continues the perfection. You are truly one of the few, the VERY few writers out there that I believe has a FUCKING CLUE about Saiyuki, with the way some people write the characters you\'d think they\'d never seen the series. *sigh* Oh well, if I can find just a bit more fiction like yours I will be more than happy. I\'m sure you\'re right about the celibacy thing in Buddism, although I do think it\'s optional. I found out a small tidbit of interesting information that you may already know about because you, in a round about way, mentioned it in your fic. There is no law or creed in Buddism that says homosexuality is wrong. So it is all right for buddists to be gay. When I found that out I just couldn\'t stop laughing. I really did enjoy this fic, though on that last part, I do think Goku snores, I\'m not sure but I think he does. *shrugs* Oh well, who really cares the fic was fantastic and I loved every smutty moment. ^_^

wow!!!! this is so amazing!!! yours is the first i\'ve come across to go so into the sex and yet fit so well within the original story.

bravo *bowing in worship*

AAAAAAWWWWWW that was so cute they way sanzo fucked goku into the bed

(Couldn\'t be bothered to sign in) Aww!!! And here I was hopping Gojyo would have heard! *Curses hangovers* Oh well! B-e-a-u-tiful lemon! *Wink* I had to read it again I couldn\'t get enough of it! Mind you, I still for the life of me cannot imagin Sanzo on the bottom... oh well! Keep writting, I enjoy your work!

Excellent one shot! (But maybe...we\'ll get more nummy yaoiness from you? *hint hint* ^_^) Very well written, and you actually had the charecters in their respective personas, which made it even better to read--overall, a terrific story, and I can\'t wait to read more from you! ^_^ *glomples* Jaa matta ne!

0.0.....^_^ great you did a perfect job *gives iamzuul a cookie* you\'ve just made me love sanzo+goku fics even more ^_^

I read it once, and I absolutely loved it. Definetely one of the best 393\'s I\'ve ever read.
Yet, when I came back to it, a whole chuck of it is missing. Like... the entire beginning and middle. I think this has something to do with the site itself, but you might want to re-upload it just in case.
It just doesn\'t make sense anymore, and I don\'t want to deny any 39 fan a story as good as yours. ^-^

~Jeshika

Wow... *jaws opened* You kno wat? The lemon/lime part is so discriptive and I tot I'm gonna faint soon... Ha... All the more its a kool story ehx? Hope you write more! Cya!

*fans herself* Wow. I do believe this is one of the hottest fanfics I have ever had the good fortune to read. :D Mad props to you!