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by irsalina

schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!! I was so hooked and so completely thrown off by the ending :) Really really good. Thanks for sharing.
person Elvaron
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*slaps forehead*
And I was wondering why the dialogue was so /corny/...
Nice job, although the ending necessarily elicited a 'Doh' ^_^;
person KD
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That rape thing was a fake? My god, You've did a superbly good job in convincing me! I enjoyed the fic very much!
person Shin
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SUGOI June-chan! Sugoi! At first I was worried, but then when it was "scripted" I was all thank kami-sama fo rthat. Anywho good job on your first lemon/yaoi story and even if you don't write another being the non-yaoi fan of them thats okay, cause I love all your stories! Ja!
person Stogue,gue
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was very good indeed ::embarrassed that she forgot to review the first time she read it:: It had me thrown for a loop at the start too, which was of course the intent, I assume. If I'd pmoremore attention to the title, it wouldn't have done^^ But yes, quite a nice job:)
person mocha
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! That was one of the best Sanzo/Hakkai lemons I've read.
person Sariyuki
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is awesome, awesome, awesome! It doesn't look like a first lemon at all @__@;; The details are deliciously drawn. Man, you're so good. I was o_O for a sd thd there when I read that Sanzo was raped by the youkai(s) but it turned out to be alrite in the end. GREAT job, sis, truly.

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