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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. I loved it! I like the sequal you started too, can\'t wait to read more of it.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this fic! I hope to read the sequel soon!
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_ONever would have thought of a far/schu/ken threesome pairing.But now that I've read this Im addicted;-;.Please please PLEASe update!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I've just finished what you have so far, and I must say that it's really interesting. I'll admit, I was skeptical at first on the powers you gave each of Weiss, and I immediately thought "Jeebus, how's the author going to pull this off? And how are they going to make me like it?" but I did like it, and I just have a few...suggestions, if you will. Ken's last name is spelled Hikada, not Hidaka. And...in the beginning, when Schwarz moved in with Wiess, it confused me about how well Weiss responded with having Schwarz IN THEIR VERY BEDS. I thought it would be more prudent to have Weiss sharing beds, with maybe Kenken on a couch, and then having Farf and Schu moving in for the molesting when the rest of the house was asleep. But, all in all, you pulled off what you have so far very nicely and I'm looking forward to what you do next.
And...on a more personal note, I like what you did with Farfarello. He's my absolute favorite character (as you can probably tell) and I find myself wanting to flame some people because they write him as a frothing-at-the-mouth lunatic with next to no attention span and an insane urge for drugs...so thank you for proving you have actually watched the series and NOT writing him like that.
~Jei, your friendly psychopath.
> Please, take this as constuctive criticism, not flaming. As a writer, I've had enough of both to know the difference, and I hope you do too.
And...on a more personal note, I like what you did with Farfarello. He's my absolute favorite character (as you can probably tell) and I find myself wanting to flame some people because they write him as a frothing-at-the-mouth lunatic with next to no attention span and an insane urge for drugs...so thank you for proving you have actually watched the series and NOT writing him like that.
~Jei, your friendly psychopath.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far...I enjoy reading it doingmy free breaks at work...lol. I do love the twists in pairings, it keeps things even more interesting. Keep up the good work...I'll be following this one for sure.
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are offically now my fav author!!!! You must update soon on this and a Tale of two chibis if you don't It may kill me and you will have to live with the forever and all eternity so HA!!!! update soon please