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for Rei Ayanami: Fallen Angel

by DavidHawthorne

schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent, excellent, EXCELLENT fic. EXTREMELY well written, very IC, and quite hot as well. The gooshing was a bit much (but my guess is that it's a personal fetish of yours, so go for it), and it would really benefit from fixing the typos, but other than that, this piece is absolutely amazing.

Any time you want to write more Gendo fic, please, don't hesitate, do so!
person The Odd One
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! That was so horrible, derogatory and disgusting that it made me want to scald my own skin off with a rusty kettle whilst gouging out my eyes with a fork, then use my telekinetic powers to morph it into a scalpel and give myself a full frontal labotomy!!
person naenon
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot indeed. More still, for the slight incestuous flavour. I also enjoyed the shadings of darkness that came from the Yui-Rei connection. But the typos could be corrected. They stood out too much.
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Gecko
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Why has almost no one reviewed this!? The quality is astounding, the content is hot, everything about this fic is done so well! You\'re obviously not getting the respect you deserve!
person Katsu
schedule December 14, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii~!! It is so rare to find HikoxKenshin fics!! This was really good! Please wirte more on this topic!! ^_^

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