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for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

by Lin

person animefetish
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL!! Awww, Aoshi is trying to set Kenshin up! That\'s way funny!! He better keep his hands off Key!! Loved this chapter!!
Ur an awesome writer!!

-Missy
person Sephiress
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeez Tsuki-sama, the alternate pairings are making my head swim. Normally I\'m a die-hard A/M fans and it pisses me to Hell to see them with different people...but I\'m making an exception for you dear. Just hope the people in my A/M group don\'t find out and butcher me, LOL.

I laughed my way through this whole chapter. I love Misao and how you\'ve protrayed her. And Kenshin as a ladies man...true to a fault.
person AlexaNight
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh funny, funny, funny. But don\'t you think Aoshi was a bit OOC? Last time I checked, he wasn\'t much of a humorous guy? But then, he\'s YOUR version of Aoshi (and I love every second of him).

Alexa
person yoh_sama
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.. another good chapter. thnx for updating.honestly I\'m hooked over w/ this pairing. great alternative besides frm Ken/Kao. Kaoru is goin to work to Aoshi wah..(lookin forward to it) dat wud be good. though I hve a Question. Did Aoshi ever considered living with Kaoru? I kno it\'s a bit early for them..but if he thinks about her all the time, wudnt he just choose to live w/ her? aniweis.. Happy New year. update soon please^_^
person animelo
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as ever! Can\'t wait to see what happens with Misao and Kenshin. Keep up the good work!
person kira-san
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah a nice chapter well-done.It really shows how Aoshi cares for Kaoru. Both of them are really sweet. hehe Kaoru doesnt wana be the mother of the Pack but rather be the sister hehehe. Gud to hear that ur gonna finish the story. I admire ur writing style and I really love all ur stories. u are really talented, I wish i cud write like u. continue on please..hve a nice day.
person catti-dono
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what can be said Tsuki-sama, its another great chapter even though there is no lemon, cries....pouts...it a good chapter cannot wait for the next long awaited up date and how you are going to interact kenshin and kauro....please dont pair kenshin and Misao thats just tooo cruel....on Kenshin\'s part....laughs...love ya...catti-dono
person Lere
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sensei, sensei!!!! I have to tell you before it\'s too late: Battousai is growling in the shadows!!! \"Tha weasel and meeeeeeeeeeee????????? First shinobi boy with my Kaoru-dono and now the weasel and me????? I think it\'s the time to practice Amakakeru Ryu No Hirameki before this crazy lady writes a lemon about us...\"

Sensei! Do you have a death wish? Tisk, tisk...

Big hugs from Brazil!

Lere
person kira-san
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wah.. a very gud fic (eps. the sex scene, really really hot.) Aoshi kinda reminds me of Inuyasha. Hopefully u will continue and complete the story.
person AlexaNight
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, such a quick update I almost missed it! Another b-e-a-utiful A/K interaction. You\'re really getting me hooked on this pairing.

Bless, and Merry Christmas

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