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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.. I never read an Aoshi and Kaoru fic. this my 1st and I quite like it. As a matter of fact I do really love it. Are u still goin to upload? hope so.. I really admire ur stories and hope u continue on. Please do continue,,
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story is progressing well and I like how you have paced the timeline...doesn\'t feel rushed or anything.
you may want to be aware that some of your earlier chapters are missing pieces, (the fight scene in the diner and the conversation between A&K where he tells her how many members are really in the gang, and such)
mostly portions of your earlier chapters.
keep up the writing
you may want to be aware that some of your earlier chapters are missing pieces, (the fight scene in the diner and the conversation between A&K where he tells her how many members are really in the gang, and such)
mostly portions of your earlier chapters.
keep up the writing
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! POOR AOSHI!!! He shouldn\'t blame himself!!! His father was a basterd!!! I loved this chapter! He finally opened up to her about who he really was!!! Yayness!!!
-Missy
-Missy
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, don\'t stop writing this!!! I fall deeper and deeper in love with it with every chap!!! It\'s just so cuuuute!!! I\'m so looking foward to their dinner with Kenshin (wouldn\'t be just super if he kinda fell for her too??? or are you planning to hook him up with Misao?! that\'d be fun too...)... please keep going, ok?! I luv this fic!!! ^_^
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh... kenshin doesnt know what she looks like... doth my ears decieve me? you i hear a start of a love triangle coming on, or am i wrong? is kenshin goign to fall for kaoru too? not knowing that she\'s aoshi\'s girl? ooh, just don\'t make kaoru betray aoshi in any way if i am right. update soon!! i totally loved it!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh, well i\'m back!! ^_^ i actually used chibi before... anyway, that was a pretty good filler chapter you had there. pretty much explained tons of stuff and had some random sanoxcho humor inserted into it as well! i liked it... keep up the awesome work!!! ^_^
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean darker side...and what are you going to do to make me want to egg ur house??? He better not do something to hurt her in anyway!!! *Watches you closely* I know something devious is going on inside of that brain of yours! Don\'t make me have to whip out the toilet paper too!! I\'ll do it!!!
Hehe, update soon please!!
-Missy
Hehe, update soon please!!
-Missy
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. And very informative at that. Everything about Yumi and Shishou\'s betrayal has become clear now. Very nice, Kanzen-sama
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay; so I already read like chapter 9 (gomen, I think) on MediaMiner.org and, of course, just loved it; but was thinking that Kenshin is getting hungry and just happens to be passing by a diner???? Giggles; Im soooo evil!!!!!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome!!!!!! i loved the chapter!!! great job!!