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Like I said before Kanzen-sama, youve got it goin on. This stroy just keeps getting better and better. Ive got you marked.

YaY!! You updated and I love this chapter! Finally getting to see the softer side of Hawke!! I love this couple so much!! Ur an amazing write! I wish I could write like you!! Keep up the good work!! I swear though...do something to pull these two apart and I'll find out where you live and egg your house! (If ur house does end up getting egged for some strange reason...it wasn't me...yet ^.^) J/k

-Missy

woz well geez misao is so cold.br well i love it and im so happy tha you updated

Awesome writing. (Its so nice to find someone who writes well). Really great story. Sexy! Woohoo! I adore the pairing. And I love your Kaoru, she's a total sweety. I don't know how she stands Black Hawke though. The guys a fucking hypocrite. I mean really, that crap he said to that one guy in the bar "Is man-handling young woman and abusing the fairer sex what you deem ‘your due’?” "Forcing those weaker than you to ‘serve’ you in fear and submission?" This coming from the guy who raped her and was tot pla planning to 'force those weaker than him to serve him in fear and submission' in the first chapter. What an asshole! She totally needs to kick his ass at least once and then he needs to buy her a car so she doesn't have to take the bus anymore. Its all the bus' fault! All of it!! heehee Oh, and somewhere in the middle of all that the need to have some more kinky sex.

Anyway, you got some awesome stuff here, I'm off to read your other stories and I look forward to lots more writing from you pleeeeease. Do I have to beg? I told you, good writing is hard to find so supply as much as you can!!!

This is one good fic.
I love it so so much!
Hope that you will up-date soon!
3 cheers for you!

Just to let you know that I am still following this story closely and it is the first that I check for every time I come onto this website. Geez, it's actually the main reason why I come to this website at all! Love your story, brilliant writing and wonderful plot. Your characters are alive. Most stories here usually suffer from a non-existant plot. This story is the complete opposite. You rock!

Wonderful writing and wonderful story! I usually only read Aoshi/Misao pairings but your intro interested me. And I was not disappointed. Great plot, wonderful writing and cannot wait for an update. Please continue.

O.O WOOOOOOOOW!!!! OMGOMGOMG!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE I'VE NEVER SEEN THIS FIC BEFORE!!!

oh my goodness, your fic iszingzing! i juzt read all 6 chapters of it and is waiting for the next one. man!!! i don't usually read stories that pair Aoshi up with anyone other than misao but I thought i saw the pairing as K/K so i clicked on it.

THi rei realised it was actually A/K and went awww shit!! BUT! the fic was sooooooo good that it kept me entranced throughout every step of the way. i love hoe you use the simplest of words to create such awesome sentences!!

Keep up the great work and hope to see more of your work.

^_~ chibi

ps: could u drop me an email when your next chapter is up please??????

God bless you for making such incredible citrus. Hawke is just awesome, even if he is a bit OOC from the normal Aoshi Shinomori persona. I'm REALLY anticipating more of your stuff now.
Alexa

I usually like Kenshin/Koau paring, but ur making me fall inlove with this couple. There's just something about him that's hooking me...possibly since he's all mysterious and everything, plus the fact that he can take care of her. I've always been big on that kinda thing. Anyway, I'm loving it to death! I wish I could write as well as you! Ur awesome and I loved this chapter! Update soon!!

-Missy