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for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

by Lin

person janelle-chan
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey gurl ya knoe that is so cool will she get pregnent????????????// pleaze i want it to be fraternal twins named Ayame and Akira okay okay....lolz keep it up folkie
person NivalRose
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just wanted to let you know that I love your story. The plot line is wonderful and I love the description that you put into this. Even though Aoshi is slightly out of character, I like this representation of him and I think that you are displaying Kaoru wonderfully as well. I can't wait until the next chapter!
person lere
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Saito and Kaoru???? SAITO AND KAO???????????!!!!!!!! Kaoru-dono???? Sweet Tanuki-chan and the bad-ass Mibu wolf????? Oh, God!!!!!! Battousai will slice you... tiny pieces, you know? But the other night I can swear I saw a pair of amber eyes in the shadows...brrrrrrrrrrrrr. And a voice said "I'll deliver Tenchuu... Himura Battousai, from Chosuu". Sensei!!!! It's your fault, but you are very lucky that us, brazilians, are very peaceful people.

Big hugs, my friend!

Lere
person Kenta D
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh YAY!!! That was in-freaking-credible!!! Beat the snot out of the guy! Course, with all the emotional repression coming out, that may not be a good idea. This is definitly one of the best adult RK stories I've ever read - and I read a lot. It's detailed, tasteful, and got one heck of a suspenseful plot. Do do do do keep writing!
person Sheen
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely AMAZING! I pity those who don't read alternative pairings - your story beats any traditional pairings that I have ever read. Needless to say this is my favourite story on this website and I find myself coming frequently to check if you have updated.
person Sosoru
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I love your descriptions. I've been taking creative writing and taking notes on your style. I don't think you know hood ood you are.
person Alexa_Night
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I usually dont go for alternate pairings, but this one is just too good to let go! And Hawke's buisness man/tough guy personality is to swoon for! can't wait for more
person bruisepristine
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, it's so enthralling. I can't stop reading.
person janelle-chan
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude this story is so coll so why did you end it??
person animefetish18
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Her personal knight in shinning armor! How sweet! I love him to death! Your story so far is totaly awesome! I hope they make up! He's all strong, sexy, and protective! ^^;

Please please update soon! Ur killing me!!

-Missy

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