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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo this story is good. The Black Hawke seems like such as cool character, True he's a bit bossy but that makes him even moe intersting. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. UPDATE QUICKLY PLEASE!!!!!
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this may be my first review on aff.net. I think I actually saw this story posted on mm.org first but didn't read it there but I am so glad that I did read it here. It's awesome! Like nothing I've read before and so mysterious. Haha! I love it! I do hope you update soon, I can't wait to read whatelse goes d Re Really, this is an awesome piece of work, your write very well and you keep the plot going that invokes more interest. Again, kudos on a dang good story (sorry, I'm currently in a bet that I can't cuss but you understand what my 'dang' is going to be even if it does seem cish)ish) and I can't wait for the next update! Until Next Time...Sfae
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoops, now i feel stupid... lol, gawd, a/k... hmmm, i don't go there. but im sure you'll write a beautiful fic. good luck!
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, very interesting. The way Aoishi treated that other girl, Lisa, was comical.
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When do we find out Black-Hawkes real name? I really like this story it is incredibly crazy (in a good way) Update soon!
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it. dark, edgy, good angst and with lots of potential. i look forward to where this is going!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I luved it i should have been the first to re but but i was running late w/ my mother so i just now doing it. anyway .... me and u need to talk ok Linda-sama, try to reach me a soon as possible.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not quite sure what it say about it. I must say I found it oddly arousing and completely surprising. I have to read the next chapter just to see what the hell is going on, lol
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heyy my lovely authoress! i haven't had one of these lemons for a while. whew, that was really really hot... and i love how you incorporate waff with the passion. update soon! who is the 'black hawke'? damn, i wish it was kenshin... but sadly, he doesn't have blue green eyes or black hair. or maybe it was disguise? and that girl was kaoru, right? update soon!!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable hot! You must write more!!! I demand it!!! I loved it!!!