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for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

by Lin

person anime pixie
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap!! great chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next! please don't make it too long before i find out.
person Jade Lotus
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story!!! Once I started reading it I couldn't stop! I love the Aoshi and Karou pairing, I don't offen see good ones of these two. Hey, is Karou going to be kidnapped or hurt or something by Shishio? Well no matter what happens next I am certain I am going to love it! Keep up the awesome work and write more soon!
person caskas_lyrik
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YaY! an update...I love the way you entice all your readers into your stories. The details and maticulous writing leaves me in awe every time I read a chapter. The chapter went a lot differently than I expected...but better because of it.
Can't wait for the next installment...it should be a good one since Shishiou is going to the wolf's den...definately an interesting scene you have created with different ways of going about it..but I know it will be a masterpiece since it is coming from you! Until next time..God bless =D
person autumndays
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has been excellent all the way thru. Must admit wasn't sure about the Aoshi Kaoru thing at first but it's brilliant. You have made me a believer. Waiting patiently for the rest of the story. Great reading.
person Beowulf31486
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Not too much action, but there was plenty of emotional drama to make up for that. Which is a good thing. It helps to build up suspense in the story and also aids in character development. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Incidently, when are you going to up-date your vampire Rurouni Kenshin story? It has been awhile since that one has been up-dated on FF.net.
person Makkura arashi
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey awesome story i cant wait for the rest! please mail me when you're done with the next chapter!! thanks
person tenshi
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love love love <3
person citrus baby
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyy! before i start, you know what bugs me? people who spell aoshi as 'aoishi' ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

anyways, as much as i hate to say it, kenshin and misao are my favorite couple in this story [goes out back and promptly shoots self]. sigh.... yeah, yeah. they're really hot. i admit it. and i can totally imagine them being into s&m. lol. anyways, love the chapter. i hope the guys make it out alright. update soon!!

~di
person gretel_chan
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for a new chapter of this! I really like this story, and how it has progressed. I'm looking forward to the rest!
person Sosoru (not logged in)
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I haven't reviewed in quite a while, so I had to catch up. Yeah, it was kinda vague. I do wonder what's going to happen. Don't keep us waiting too long.

Soso-chan

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