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for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

by Lin

person Animalia1
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was my first time reading a story written by you, and I just wanted to say that I have not only fallen in love with this story, but also with Aoishi. Your writing is very fluent, backed by a strong plot and good character development. This is by far one of the best stories I have read in Kenshin fanfiction and I certainly will be disappointed when it comes to its end.
person mrs. d
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, this is the best goddamn story i've read in a while, believe it or not i spent 4 hours of my day reading this !! gosh, its absolutely brillian!
person Beowulf31486
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You have done a real good job with this story. This is one of the few stories here that actually have a good storyline and isn't about just random, waffy, sex scenes. Of course, I wouldn't expext anything less from you. The story is slowly reaching its climax, the clash between Shishio, and Aoshi & Kenshin. The relationships between Kenshin and Misao have been defined and stabilized, Aoshi admits that he is indeed in love with Kaoru. Yumi has realized that what she has done is wrong and that she must stop Shishio. These next three chapters will be very action packed and emotions will be running even higher. Even though these will be the last three chapters, I am looking forward to reading them and discovering what exactly is in store for everyone.
person CybrEmly01
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore it. And it's just the thing to have during the cold & flu season. I usually manage to
avoid it, but I guess I'm not lucky this time. My head feels like it's been stuffed with cotton
batting even without the medicine.

Ah, well. At least I have wonderful fanfiction like yours to get me through. Many good wishes
to you and yours Tsuki-san!

CybrEmly
person Rhia
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I feel so bad for Yumi *cries*. Yay for Kenshin and Misao though
person Nette JP
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ::bows down the most awsome authour on AFF::THAT WAS SOO TOTALLY AMAZING!!!! Ok i am soooo NOT a Aoshi/Kaoru fan but i think this story has totally change my view on that!! HAHAHAHA!!! You make them seem like there were actually suppose to be together in the first place!! HEHEHE!! and may i say the story is very VERY hoTT (with 2 t's!!!!) I cant believe how good this story turned out!! TOTALLY AMAZING!!! I cant wait for the next update!!
person jodibetz
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When is the story (and the lemons) going back to Aoshi and Kaoru? I don\'t wanna offend anyone and obviously I\'m still reading your story. but Kenshin and Misao together just gives me the creeps!
person Malik\'s Girl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!! I simply love the story, and I\'m so glad that you\'re back and fine again! I was dying to know what went next! Keep going on this wonderful fic, it\'s one of my fav RK fics ever! Love xoxo Malik\'s Girl
person twishinky
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tsuki-sweetie... Back with a vengeance! I\'m happy that you\'re progressing really well... I knew you had some problems before but I had no idea you were under a lot of strain. I was diagnosed a border bipolar a long way back, and i do know know how bad manic highs and lows can get. Anyway. I\'m here whenever you need me ok??? PS. I really do love this story.... Fantastic update :) *hug*
person caskas_lyrik
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh another chapter..so soon?? Must be Christmas!!!! It\'s so good! Please please please update..you are leaving me hanging..and I must know what happens to Kay..Aoshi.....ayyyyyyyyyyyyye!! Update soon =D

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