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I love this story! It\'s the best I\'ve read so far! Please keep on writing!

Hey,

I know it\'s been a while since I\'ve left a review or read your story. I just got finished catching up. Sorry to hear about your kitty. I love my animals and I hate losing any of them. Hope your boys have safe travels. Good update.

Take care,

Sosoru

Just wanted to say that i just began your story and I thinks it\'s awesome. The depictions are humane, but real, and I love all the OOCness. I also love the pairing. Aoshi is HOT!

How come this fic is not tagged N/C??? I won\'t develop about the complete OOCness and other flaws, because I certainly wouldn\'t have read this if the tag had been there. A young girl getting assaulted (you try to be ambiguous, but sorry, you don\'t play on the line well enough) by a stranger in a park, liking to be raped, is this the beginning of your *love* story here?? Rape is what it takes to \"frigid\" women to like sex???? The tags are mandatory at least before the first chapter if you don\'t have space for them in the summary. *angry* I\'ll add that I left only one negative review in five years (in ff.net) and I would have respected your space and views if if you had warned as every other writer (yaoi, yuri, N/C, etc...)here does.

Oh I just love Soujiro. He is one of my favorite characters. Seeing Aoshi rough him up was memorable as well. I\'m so looking forward to the next chapter!

Kanzen, with everything that you have going on it\'s understandable if you take some time away from updating. I thank you for the hard work you\'ve put in on such a wonderful story. I\'m sorry that you have so many things pulling you away. I hope things calm down soon and that your loved ones in Iraq are safe. Plus I hope your health improves. You have my best wishes. Take the time you need. The faithful readers will be here when you return. I\'ll look forward to the next chapter when it comes.

Oh, sensei! I\'m so happy to see you around again. I\'m happy because I know that when you write you are having fun, and it\'s good for your soul.
Life is very busy right now because we are moving the office to a new, bigger place. I\'m almost crazy trying to keep my work going between boxes, papers. One day we don\'t have telephone, the other are the computers...grrrrrrrrr. And the clients are going crazy too....
But I\'m always thinking about you my friend. I told my mother about your son going to Iraque the day you sent me the message and your family are in her prayers too. We are begging God to look for him and the others boys. Everything will be alright, I\'m sure. I have faith. In no time you will have your boy in your arms again, sensei.
I\'ll expect the updates with a good heart because I know you\'ll put them on line when you are better. And when you are feeling down, remenber your friends that are far way. You are in my heart, always! Don\'t forget!
Oh, about the chapter, hehe... I liked this one very much. The conversation between Aoshi and Soujiro was great. It\'s a lesson that all teens must learn. It\'s what I like in your stories: a deep meaning.

Big hugs my dear, dear friend!

Lere

wow. that\'s so unlike soujirou. but hey, you updated! loved the chapter. update soon!

So so good. Yes I admit, I am - or was - one of those that snuck read your story *ashamed* But no more!
I can\'t help myself but loving every word, every chapter. The writing is aggressive and at the same time there is so much...love.
*sighs blissfully* The pairing is unusual, and maybe that\'s why I like it so much. Aoshi is sooo damn sexy *excuses her cussing* but he is!
Sorry to hear about your cat though, *tear* I have one too and she\'s my little girl.
I also pray that your family will come home safely. War is a horrible thing. *sad face*

You write, we read.
Lizzy and her kitty.

Hey! I\'m so sorry about your cat... it\'s awful to lose a dear pet, I know... but I\'m completely glad you updated, and this story is fantastic... thanx a lot! Kisses