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for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

by Lin

person Mia-chan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo. I think I love you. Very nice chapter, Misao and Kenshin ( very hot )!
I cannot wait for more chapters, this is one of few stories I read on the R.K tab. But mainly that\'s because I cannot stop thinking its the hottest, most passionate writing here. ^_^
Keep up the good job!
person animelo
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I like the electricity between Misao and Kenshin. Although I usually like Aoshi and Misao together your fic is really making me see that other pairings could work if the author is as gifted as you. Please keep updating and keep Misao spunky and wild--wouldn\'t want Kenshin to get bored now would we?
person Caskas Lyrik
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well..I reviewed this chapter on another site..but I had to leave a review here also..because it is soooo good! I can\'t tell you enough how great of a writer you are...I love that you incorporate sex and a great story without a huge transition! Simply wonderful is all I have to say!...Can\'t wait for another chapter..don\'t keep us waiting too long ;) Much love!
person Nival Rose
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, I am not usually a fan of KxM, but I really enjoyed their coupling in this story. Ever since you introduced those characters, there has been sexual tension, and I am glad to see them do something about it. I think that you did a lovely job of bringing them together -- I didn\'t think I ever anticipated Misao getting smacked! At first I was a little worried that Misao was getting to \"tame\" to quickly, but I enjoyed how she had spunk at the end of the chapter, showing that she is still as fiesty as ever, despite Kenshin\'s attempts to mellow her. Nicely done! Also, on a last thought, I liked Aoshi\'s momentary lack of defense when Kaoru admited her love for him. It isn\'t often that it happens, so it was a nice touch.
Lovely chapter, as usual!
person MEGASUPER
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not!not yet anyway!thanks for responding to all my reviews!thats what makes me write them!the new chapter was very very interesting!i enjoed it a lot!kenshin whipping misao!that was strange!i bet she is tamed now!good luck with the next chapter and please more aoshi/kaoru!
person mz.amber eyes
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for some straaaange freakish reason.. i actually found that as hot as hell...

yeah... i don\'t wanna talk about it.

its like my rk world is being tilted and spun around over and over again.

loved it. [horrifyingly enough]

i\'m going to go lie down now.
person catti-dono
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dances around, does a back flip, and kisses Tsuki-sama sensai; YEAH, finally someone had the balls to write an Aoshi/Kenshin sex scene; geeze, FINALLY!!!!!!
person catti
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOPPPPPS; okay so I also have this fetish but really it was suppose to be misao and kenshin but I had this dream while I was reviewing and it just slipped; laughs, ducks flying debride.....hmmmm; wonder, maybe, HEY it could happen...laughs
person catti-dono
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LAUGHS OUT LOUD...BAKA!!!
person Malik\'s Girl
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I\'m so in love with this story... and thanx sooooo much for the Misao-Kenshin pairing, they are sweet together!!! Please keep going, ok?! Kisses!!!

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