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for When Staring Into the Abyss...

by Litilu

person Cacao
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw...that's it? I really wish there was more...
person Z
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the characterizations in this story, but the extreme typos in places really bugged me. I would love this story if those were edited out.
person Sephy
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww ;_; I really like this story. It\'s sad but it\'s true. I think you did a very good job in depicting the inner thoughts of Touga, and I love how you wrote everything out. Cool.
person Vinyl Bouzouki
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... good grief. O_o PTougTouga. Poor Saionji. Beautiful characterization, great writing once again... very vivid and colourful. *Hamana*.
person janette
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dark. Sexy. Wicked. Delicious. I have a thing for Akio exactly for the reason of this story. The master manipulator. And I loved the conflict you showed within Touga. The predator swallowed by a bigger one and trying to save his friend from this cobra but realizing he can\'t. Beautiful.
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please tell me there is going to be more! I loved it...so well written!
person Psyienna
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice one-shot that could easily be lengthened into more chapters, or even a series. Even though this is a short fic, you took great care in fleshing out the characters, and the flashback added a nice dimension to Touga\'s and Saionji\'s friendship. Good job!
person Idunn
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please oh please do a continuation?

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