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for Impure thoughts

by LadyShiva

schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,
I really enjoyed reading 'impure thoughts'. It's the first AFF I've read with this pairing, and even though I'm still and AxS fan, I was pretty impressed (not to mention bothered) by this story :) Keep up the good work I'd say, you can consider me a fan ;)
greets,
kali
person Bakaryu
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was well done. You did very well in keeping both character in character. Seras slipped a few times, but not too badly.
person -Star Kali-
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
20% more lemony she says. Anyway, i loved it! There's always time for a quick wet dream fic! Sure they've been done, but not to death!! A sequal from Father Andersons PoV could be funny, but you might make it a seperate story. Now, go write me some ExI!
person Mistress_Io
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what Ie toe to call a quick and dirty lemon. Nice and to the point. Ah good ol' dream fics, they explain EVERYthing! Not that I mind, it was funny and wonderfully nummy. Oh and I thought it was funny that you portrayed Seras as a masochist; she always came across that way to me too. Or maybe that was just the whole "Master" thing making her seem uterly submisive. Anyway, well done and all that, now get back to shine!
person Kitty_Kamen
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! Ahahahaha! Holy crap that was great! yeah I can't imagine any other way you could write a Seras/Anderson one shot than to make it a dream. There would be no way to get those two together without a SERIOUS backstory. Like in that story "coming to terms".
Oh well, that was really funny. The end had me laughing my head off. Any plans to write an interlude with Alucard for this story?
person Thess
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job, it was well written and characterized (despite the obvious oocness at times). I treat An/S as I treat E/I rivalhet! (with more violence than bickering). I do think you should leave it there, the fic comes to an end in a very stylish manner.
person Kaliyuga
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. That was definatly surprising! The end had me wide eyed with shock then busting up with laughter. I have to say, if they ever did get together like that I imagine the outcome would be pretty close. Ah Seras, onn yon your dreams.

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