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Very nice story! The section between when Tenchi rammed his shorts on and when he started kissing Sasami didn\'t feel like Tenchi was acting quite in character, but overall I liked it. Unfortunately is seems something got a little monkeyed-up during the transfer to the new database as there are multiple typoes throughout the story that look like your hand stuttered while you were typing. Anyway, you\'ve written one sweet piece of erotic fanservice there. ^_^ You really should do a sequel. It would be interesting to see how long it takes for everyone else in the household to cotton on to what\'s happened and the repercussions of that revelation. I\'d also like to see Tenchi grappling with his own feelings about what they did together and what it will mean for their futures.

JUst a note. If you\'re following the OAV timeline then Sasami is about 300+ years old. And you know it would be interesting to see what the other girls would think if they found out about this. (Hint: If there was ever a person who would find out about these two then that would be Washuu.)

^^ great fic, just I wish more people paid attention in the series as to Sasami\'s age, she\'s not a child, its just that Juraian\'s age slowly, in the OVA she\'s somewhere around seven hundred years old if I\'m not mistaken =P

hi im josh and i think this is a great fic i hat to really look for tenchi and sasami fanfics i think they are a good couple but any way i would like u to make another chapter probably about how their relationships is getting on and her probably being pregnant and and well u know if u dont then email me on josh20_3@hotmail.com piece bye

for those of u that think tenchi is a pedphile in this story u are wrong in the mang and anime all of the girls are from other planets put for iaka specics the never age so she is probile the gae of an adult just with a kid body

You did that very sensitively. But may I add, WHO\'s gonna arrest him? The girl is from another planet! And while she may be a young innocent, Susami is older physically(depending on the continuity!) than Tenchi.
I won\'t lie. It was also a turn on. Lets\' be honest. This site is about sex, right? So I was turned on! So sue me!

Well, after thinking about it for a while, I\'ve decided that I really can\'t come up with an adequate continuation for this story. Because of this, I am open for ideas, if there are people who would still like to see it continued. They can be simple pairing ideas, situational ideas, or an entire storyboard. Depending on how fitting I deem any ideas I may get, \"No Need for a Smile\" may see a second chapter.

*please, don\'t post ideas here. email them to me. it should appear right next to my name, but I\'ll go ahead and type it again: copypaste003@yahoo.com*

As for now, however, I am currently slowly coming up with ideas for new fics, as well as a third chapter for my FLCL lemon. Thanks for the reviews.

This was very magical-
It can make people think about relationships of different ages.

Very well done indeed, need alitle more depht to it and your do fine