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yes you sure weren\'t yourself when you wrote this. This is vertually the same as another fic i read down to some of the same wording in sentences. I know for a fact that you copied this persons work and are trying to pass it off as your own and i think that\'s absolutely disgraceful! you should be ashamed of yourself. I swear. I don\'t remember the name or author of the original fic off the top of my head but i\'m going to find it and then i\'m going to do 2 things:
1: write her a niiiiccee long email including your pen name and link
2: alert aff.net to your plagerism.

I hope that this email will make you learn your lesson you freak.

~always, Skibz

loved it!

nice threesome

Great story! But wasn\'t this suppose to be in ff.net? I read it there but i didn\'t have time to finish it. It was really great and fun... very naughty!!! hehehehe... could you let me know of other stories you wrote? i wanna read some of them if you don\'t mind. Thatnks and keep working on your stories. Ciao!!!!

Really i admire your skills.Bravo i congradulate u on such a arousing story and the plot of kenshin having two sides simply brilliant.In the future i expect nothing but the best from you.



Sincerly,
Master Sesshomaru ^_^

Very sweet and sweaty. i loved your story it was great. I do hope you continue to write. It would be cute to see how kenshin handles a pregnant karou.

I love every chapter of this story. The end it fitting since it brings the story full circle. Great writing!

Wow! I just want to say that you are a great writer! I think that this story is fantastic, very well written. I\'m sad that you had to end it. I hope your start another story soon! Keep up the good work!

Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Great job by the way, can\'t wait for more. My mouth is all dry. Geez. I just wanted to inform you that you\'re missisng some parts between ch1and2. Kenshin voices his challenge and then it\'s the next day. It doesn\'t tell us what happened. I would also really appreciate it if you\'d add more detail and maybe even draw out the episode where Kaoru ties Kenshin up. That one\'s fun, but a little un-finished. Keep up the good work! If you need some more ideas...hmm...let me think a minute....Well yo can have a lot of fun playing with Kenhsin\'s fierce possesiveness. Maybe you should have something happen taht makes him insanely jealous and then bring that into their lovemaking. I\'m always a fan of sweet torture so why don\'t you have him pleasure her while denying her release? Or refusing to actually go into her making her climax over and over again orally until she can\'t stand it. Or have Kaoru torture Kenshin. Either way it should end in begging for the other person. It\'s nice to know someone needs you that much, don\'t you agree? Well that\'s all I know, but you should check out SesshaKenshin\'s fic Wild Welcome Home. I just know you\'ll enjoy. It\'s my personal favorite and you might just get a few ideas. Sayonara!

wow. simply put this was totally great. i cant wait until u write another one. this is one of the greatest lemons i have ever read.