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by Tokimon

person Star Kalia
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, not great but good. One, I don\'t think Luffy could be THAT stupid, but he does act like a child most of the time. And two, they are tangerines asshole DX
person Kikue-chan
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ano... Aringato!
You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer!You think I'm a good het writer! YAY! Thanks for the review, Ima gonna run it through spell check as soon as I get "word" fixed. And I forgot the disclaimer!

Disclaimer - I dont own One Peice.

*sigh of relife* Now that thats all taken care of, must start writing "The Fine Line"
person DarkPenguin
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whhhooo hooo !!! :D

I think you did a great job on this!!! Id like to see you write more fanfics for One Piece. Theres not enough het het writers for this fandom I think.
I would just run it through ad ped perfect or spell check, which doesnt always get rid of all the mistakes ( I should know ^^; ) but it sometimes helps. Keep up the good work though. I think you did a great job.
person Kikue-chan
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ano....
I am the author, and this is only my third fic, and my first one peice fic. If you like this one I have a Hellsing in my head, and Artemis Fowl in my head and..... A couple Naruto, Inu Yasha, and some originals. Please Review!

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