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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...That was good ...real good... you should write more I have no idea what but you should
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was alright, I was having a bad day really depressed & you brightened it up for me *thnxwas was laughing my ass off at shuichi talking like that & being so dominitive ^_^. I agree that you need to have more of a plot, & I don't think theres a need for someone saying something like [ your asking to get fucked hard by a big fat cock ] mabye just [your just asking to get fucked] or something like that. I hope you do the threesome next time or shui/ryu or yuki/ryu.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah thats right bitch, take all!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story it inspires me to do naughty things. But seriously, excellant job with the smut. I enjoy the interaction between the characters. Yes its OOC, but who the hell cares when you have 2 delicious hot men doing slutty things to each other. I swear I about died with the pimp dialogue coming out of Shuichi's mouth. Oh my god, awesome job!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really.. this is the smut-iest gravitation fic I've ever read! I like it though! haha.. Never in my life I could imagine Yuki being the slave for once. Mmmm he must be kinda sexy! hehe..
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn damn damn.. i don't know what to say...that was HOTTT... i'll be looking for...maybe... another one...**
puppy dog eyes**
puppy dog eyes**
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
feel no pressure of producing more material. it couldn´t get any better than this anyway... yey!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow english isnt your first language???????????????????? your write really well too, i mean i read alot of fanfic's and half of them sound like they were written by 3 year olds. you have my respect man i couldnt write a decent paragraph in ish ish and im in spanish 3 keep up the good work
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG If anyone flames this fic I swear I will hunt them down and kill them! This fic is awsome!!! Keep up the good work!
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all, it was awsome ^__^ I loved it! The one thing that I didn't like too much was the sex scence o.o which is strange cuz that' usually my favorite part! xDD Still it was hot =D
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's a little OOC but other then that its really interesting. please continue ^^
Ja ne
Ja ne