rate_review Reviews

your right about it being a bit fluffy (which isnt really bad) and im pretty sure shu and eiri have lots of fights, besides that and the ooc-ness (mostly eiri) its pretty daood ood ^^

~*Aka

Alexx: English isn't thy native tongue? I would have not guessed, for thy words are moving

Yuki: (translating: english isn't your first language? Who knew, you write very well)

Alexx: continue on thy journey on one-time romance poetry

Yuki: (translating: please write more one-shot fanfic poetry) Can't speak you just speak in regular english, and not all this fancy mid-evil crap?

Alexx: Damare! you're ruining the effect!

Shuichi: don't you dare tell my Yuki to shut up!

Alexx: you shut up to before I write a fanfic where Eiri-san rapes you

Shuichi: (whimpering in fear)

Alexx: please write more fanfics like these, you're very good