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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter. keep up the good work and update soon i want to know what is going to happen to toboe and tsume. god their so cute.heehhehe
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No fair!!! You have to continue this!!! Please?!?
Ebil cliffhangers!!!!
>>; That's alot of exclaimation marks. ^^;
Ebil cliffhangers!!!!
>>; That's alot of exclaimation marks. ^^;
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! PLEASE.... I\'ve been waiting ages, hoping you would! I think its time... but I don\'t want to rush you y\'know, or the quality of the writing might lack... and I don\'t want that. I doubt your other readers want that either...
BUT PLEASE update soon....!!!! Thanks.
~StarwolfRealms~
BUT PLEASE update soon....!!!! Thanks.
~StarwolfRealms~
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this fic. It\'s very well written (a rarity on this website IMO) and the characterization is great. Plus, we get tons of Tsume and Toboe! Please update, I\'m enjoying it so much!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is good. Really good. I like how you really get into Tsume\'s head. Its beautifully done. I\'m also quite curious about his past now, or at least your take on it... Its interesting. Keep on writing! I want to know more... I hate that cliffhanger...what is the thing Tsume and Toboe encountered? What is it that was so pleasant about Tsume\'s past? I\'d like to know the answers.
~Starwolf, of the Otherworld Realms~
~Starwolf, of the Otherworld Realms~
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought your story was pretty good. I like the way you portray all of them in character, unlike other fanfictions. Please update soon. This is definitely good.
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really well done.
You have an *excellent * grasp of the characters, and the story is compelling, flows well, and is thrumming with just the right amount of tension. As you speak for Tsume, I can really feel his conflict and the ambiguity of his feelings for Toboe. I love the slight animosity he bears for Kiba ... it\'s perfect.
I think you\'ve perfectly captured the beauty of the series ... the hope and cynicism that drives the pack to keep on, the instinctual love and need they have for each other, (though they deny it), and the subdued, quite tone of the series as a whole.
I look forward to reading more, if you plan on it. Thank you for archiving it here.
Julie
You have an *excellent * grasp of the characters, and the story is compelling, flows well, and is thrumming with just the right amount of tension. As you speak for Tsume, I can really feel his conflict and the ambiguity of his feelings for Toboe. I love the slight animosity he bears for Kiba ... it\'s perfect.
I think you\'ve perfectly captured the beauty of the series ... the hope and cynicism that drives the pack to keep on, the instinctual love and need they have for each other, (though they deny it), and the subdued, quite tone of the series as a whole.
I look forward to reading more, if you plan on it. Thank you for archiving it here.
Julie
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, an update! And a creepy-cliffhangerish one at that!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ack don't leave it there!!! plz update soon! i've been checking everday now! don't end it there!! TT_TT
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! What a kewl fic!!! Very neat idea -- keep up the good work, and update soon!!!