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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is good so far but you need to get another descriptive for Dee and Ryo's hair. Seeing it described as "silky [insert color] tresses" is getting a bit monotonous. Dark locks? ny sny strands?
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me like dis
pls pls pls update soon
pls
pls pls pls update soon
pls
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh.... Where so I begin well first off. Excellent chapter is I say so. Now the plot thickens. You really now have me interested on what will happen in the next chapter between all of the characters. Please update this fic soon because I got to know what is going to happen.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! Ryo is almost as good as I am with a bow and arrow, except i go out into the wilderness and kill wild Emu. Also, i know exactly how Diana feels. When i lay on the bed naked my chinchillas always just walk away too.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I really hate it when you leave it with a cliffhanger like that one! Great story so far, also great detailing through out the story. Hope to see the next chapter up really soon.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great story. I like the setting and the characterization. Dee and Ryo are so hot! Write more!
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I really like the beginning. I can't wait to read more.