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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha. Thank you for killing Plum. That little dancing persocom needed killed, and bad.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. That was a total first for me It was awesome keep on going.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmmm interesting.....
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to lie, this was horrible.
I mean, absolutely terrible.
The storyline in general was okay, it was kind of a stretch, but I can deal.
Otherwise, holy crap. You forgot your -ed endings. A lot. Very a lot. And when you're describing 'tits', use breasts or something less...offensive? I mean, if a character is saying it, cool, otherwise, hell no, use a different word. And for Pete's sake, just one lick cannot get somebody to cum. I was severely disappointed. I'm not going to rate it to save you some of your dignity.
I mean, absolutely terrible.
The storyline in general was okay, it was kind of a stretch, but I can deal.
Otherwise, holy crap. You forgot your -ed endings. A lot. Very a lot. And when you're describing 'tits', use breasts or something less...offensive? I mean, if a character is saying it, cool, otherwise, hell no, use a different word. And for Pete's sake, just one lick cannot get somebody to cum. I was severely disappointed. I'm not going to rate it to save you some of your dignity.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~frowns~ thats totally horrible. And not even really rape.. it was just molestation.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...creepy, freaky, not right...weirdo
dragonfly created kotoko. he has a name i cant remember. a real name. but he was called dragonfly.
dragonfly created kotoko. he has a name i cant remember. a real name. but he was called dragonfly.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyeroll* That was a bit ridiculous, don\'t you think? :\\
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was mean, and stupid. Not only was it short...and without any feeling whatsoever, yah had to go and kill plum. I know I know, should not of read it, but seriously you coulda atleast made it more interesting damn. its like. *Lick lick lick, dead.* oh well. Cant all be good stories.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Dude,
You are some kinda freak...
You are some kinda freak...
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have never seen such a fanfiction in my life. It was WEIRD but oh-so ME...!! You are very talented to write about such disturbing things! ^^