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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Plot was good, leave Brock out of it. I hate others who interfere with AshxMisty! That was off to too fast a start, give us the chapter that prompted this event! Oh and make sure Ash and Misty have really good, ol' dirty sex; I love that! hehehe!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha! That was great!! You guys should back off! Maybe it was supposed to be short and funny...lol I thought it was funny...Like a five minute cartoon short...hmm Well thanks for the laughs!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was the worst pile of crap i have ever seen on this site.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good and all but you rushed it a little too much. Just a little more detail and it be all good.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy... cheese.
That was effing annoying.
Never do that again.
That was effing annoying.
Never do that again.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this lemon alot. But, I wonder how Ash got into the girl\'s locker room? And what was Misty thinking that made her decide to jump on top of Ash and have sex with him while they were in the girl\'s locker room? Do you think you could write a chapter saying what caused them to do those things. Maybe Misty was doing it to punish Ash or perhaps she thought this was the perfect chance for her to have sex with the boy she has a crush on. Think about it. I like the Ash/Misty couple.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much, but I think I\'d like to see how Ash gets into the girl\'s locker room accidentilly (what he was doing before he got into the locker room and what he was thinking about that made him come in without realizing it) and maybe Brock should be left out.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much, but I think I\'d like to see how Ash gets into the girl\'s locker room accidentilly (what he was doing before he got into the locker room and what he was thinking about that made him come in without realizing it) and maybe Brock should be left out. I think it would also be nice to know what made Misty decide to have sex with Ash when she caught him peeping (what she was thinking when Ash looked at her vagina) that would be nice too.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"hehe"... Let me think, no. It sucks ass.