schedule
August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got serious problems and never had sex in your life but apparently need it in short your fucked up dude
i give this a 0 out of 10
i give this a 0 out of 10
schedule
April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pointless, but also kind of in a good way. You should continue this and add a little more detail.
schedule
October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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What the hell was that?
*I just wasted a whole 30 seconds of my life reading that!?!*
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What the hell was that?
*I just wasted a whole 30 seconds of my life reading that!?!*
schedule
September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool...
schedule
June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This fic... to put it blantly, was not the best in the world. You could do with elaborating more, and they were all VERY OoC. You may want to find a suitable beta reader to go over your fics and help you out. You have a lot of work to do if you want to be a good fanfic writer, so please, I encourage you, get a beta reader and check out some of the other fanfics and see what is different about yours and theirs. E-mail me if you\'d like to talk more.
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you ended to quickly
schedule
May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It has potential, but you might want to run it through Spellcheck.
schedule
May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A good PWP, but it needs to be longer! Add in those juicy details that make it exciting:D
schedule
April 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT\'S what i call a two-one-quickie-hormone-explotion-that-has-gone-totaly-beserk!