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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I've read such a good story, your style is excellent. I'm not too fond of the characterization (Tai and Daisuke being so bad or Takeru being so helpless) but it fits the story perfectly. Keep it up.
One more thing, as embarrassed I am to say it, I'm a rabid Takari fanboy (I don't hate Davis but still...) so I'd like it if you went with that couple (Yes I know it's unoriginal as hell but I like it).
One more thing, as embarrassed I am to say it, I'm a rabid Takari fanboy (I don't hate Davis but still...) so I'd like it if you went with that couple (Yes I know it's unoriginal as hell but I like it).