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for Ash\'s Revenge

by SpiralBreeze

person McKnight
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought Delia was single. Just because Oak was much older than her, why would that be a reason for Ash to be mad at him for dating her?
person TriRedEye
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Looking forward to the next installment of the Chronicles.
person Funkyafroman
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Great job!
person Funkyafroman
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was a good chapter. Mrs. Ketchum got very humiliated. I\'m starting to hate Proffeser Oak. Mrs. Ketchum is a bitch. Good job.
person Akewataru
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey remember me? I\'m that Bassoon player that contacted you a few months before. Hopefully, I should be going to college on the east coast. Wow, I had no idea you wrote this story until today. This is a awesome a story and is the best one on adultfanfiction.net hands down! Oh, about your sequel to Sibling Rivalry, sounds good continue with it! If you need any suggestions just e-mail me. Ciao babe.

~Akewataru~
person Funkyafroman
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So that Tuilli (bastard) Brock was under hypnosis the whole time? Freaky stuff right there. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty interesting. Strange, and very ooc, but interesting. I look forward to more, if you decide to write more.
person Bio1590
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Left hand works good if you\'re right handed and you\'re sitting at the computer :P
person Funkyafroman
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here Iam on the first day getting my new computer hooked up reviewing this. Thank you for not letting that Sacco di merda (Italian for Bag of shit) touch Misty in a sexual way. That was a good chapter. I hope Brock doesn\'t hurt the baby in any way. As for your male masturbation question, I don\'t masturbate much because I am a good boy =). But when I do, I use my right hand to rub the shaft.
person 3rik
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO! PIKACHU ROX!
Thats is hilarious!
But the overall story was good

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