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for Ash\'s Revenge

by SpiralBreeze

person Bio1590
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, 10,000 volts is less than what you receive if you get shocked by a doorknob, so Brock couldn\'t have died. People have been hit by 1,000,000-10,000,000 volts from Lightning and lived. It would have to be pretty high to kill Brock.
Anyways, this story kicks ass!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please explain what Brock meant, I\'m worried about Misty and the baby
person Sies807
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another sucessful chapter Woot Brock Burn like the fucker he was
person Funkyafroman
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. But I have a question. I know I am an idiot so sorry about the stupidity. Did brock poison Misty or something? Or did he fuck her? Anyway, keep up the great work. You have a lot of talent.
person Patrick
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!! Brock needs to be beaten, quartered, drawn, shot, stabbed, and kicked repeatedly. I can\'t believe he is sabotaging their baby, hes such a horrible bastard. I love the story, so emotional and shocking
person Ian Rubin
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why suicide? Cant you just have Charizard blast Brock\'s ass to the moon?
person chi
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jawdrop* holy shit ahhhh wtf is your problem, how can u stop rite there!?!?!?!??!???!!!! eyyy u neeeeed to keep righting omg i need to know wat happends next, and i love your storys, and how many chapters are gona be in this story and when are u gona finish it????
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what is a partial birth abortion?
person Mr.Vampire
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this has me whieting on edge of my set to see what ash dose to brock. Please continue and update soon.
person Cat
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more

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