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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good, but something really pissed me off.
How did yuki thrust inside of her when he was wearing clothes, and she was wearing clothes as well....that just really shited me off.
How did yuki thrust inside of her when he was wearing clothes, and she was wearing clothes as well....that just really shited me off.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man you suck so much ass. Stop writing now and never come here again unless it\'s to read you stupid shit. Reasons:1. You rushed the lemon.2. None does it right after they say they want to.3. There has to be peoper stimulation from the girl or it will hurt her.Basically Thoru should have been really wet.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea.........it is crappy...........:).but interesting
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hasnt yuki ever heard of foreplay
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the end wasn\'t THAT crappy. cute story...
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh geee, IT'S MY FIRST FUCKING LEMON!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Could the description of sex get anymore cliche and bland? And could you possibly think up a dumber situation to turn into teh omg HAWT sex0rz? This has even less plot than blatantly PWP smut.
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read over it and I made alot of Spelling errors. I promise to fix them and re-edit the story. My first lemon story ever! I've been delayed on Wolf's Howl since I have my lil brother who keeps on crying >.> Thanks for reading, guys! Would you guys like a sequel?
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't bad. It was actually very g I I loved the idea of how you got them together.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, well it's was good. I always love a good yuki and tohru lemon