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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was unbelievable. The way you were holding everything off until the end. *applause*
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent study of repressed desire, guilt and love. Very nicely written overall. There are a couple of places where the tense changes and sometimes words, or partial words seem to run into each other.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I didn\'t expect that ending...it was a shock! I truly liked your story, I hope to read more!
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would read anything you write ever, this was fabulous, I ketp starting over to see if I missed who it was about, but by hte end...wow.
You are such a gifted writter, simply amazing. Please write more!
You are such a gifted writter, simply amazing. Please write more!