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woowee that was a hot one. I just love Yuki's meanness thats the only way he shows he cares. hmmm....when do we get the threesome? Might I suggest that Ryu gets to be a seme and yuki is uke or maybe Schu is the seme and Ryu is the uke?(maybe maybe not). Well I like Gravitation but I like Weiss better *goes and glomps on Aya* but it's fun to read about other Bishonen occasionally *glomps on Sanzo* and that outfit we do get to see it again right?

Oh my god... You'd better do the next chapter before I hunt you down and sit on your couch and stare at you like a vulture.

Now write the next chapter!

I really, truly, absolutely LOVED, your third chapter. PLEASE keep writing. I love imagimagery, and graphics, i just love yaoi but this has been one of the best stories i've read in a while... THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

this is great and no matter what anyone says this does have a plot. I hope this reveiw helps and i hope u write a lot more when i get some of my stories up woud u like to read them and review if so email me and i'll give u my author name cause it ain't eli. Yea i can't wait till friday ^-^

I bow in your essence!! ::Bows repeatedly:: You must continue this! Devoted serevnt for life if you do! I s! :! ::continues bowing::

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi. Someone told me there was a post on this site by me, and I was disturbed to see that it was true. Where I don't really mind what was said (although I disagree with some of it), it bothers me that someone is posting as me. Please remove the post as soon as possible. Thank you.

Molly

I likes teh story muchly! I want more! I can't wait for the threesome! *bounces* That YukixShu lemon was goo~d *drool* Umm...yeah. I'm really looking forward to more chapters! *pats your back* Good author lady gets cookie! *hands you very large cookie*

dude!!!! loved it!!!! you have to continue!!!!

WOW! This was really good Iurge you to continue! Now I have read some of the other reviews and find myself agreeing with some and not agreeing with others. For ex: What dumbfuck saiout out your fic and how bad it sucked I must disagree with him. You see he was just being an ass, now There are some parts that I do agree with on such as the plot, storyline and on how she needs to fill it in more, but you must rember this is but her first fic and is still in the works. I don't think dumbfuck should've been so cruel in critizing her work. Give her time to progress, don't just flame her like that, give her constructive critizism not bullshit. Now with most of the others I agree for a beginner I think this story has a lot of potential ^__^ I have read alot of fics in my time and for a beginner it's not have bad. So Erotic Goddess, do not listen to the dumbfuck and plz continue the story. ^_^ I can't wait for the nexted chapter.

Jaa ne!