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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the best story i have read today ur a really good writer
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omygosh! i loved this story!! its so sweet with lots of yaoi goodness ^_^ im glad you still decided to post it even with so few reviews. i would have reviewed if i had seen it earlier ^_^ anyways great story! it gave me warm fuzzy feelings ^_^
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply enthralling. I\'m not one for yaoi since sadly, my encounter with yaoi stories have left a bitter taste in my mouth. But this story in particular had certain elements to it that deviate from the other yaois. For me, it had soul, not just m/m, anal, oral, etc...The story wasn\'t merely focused on the sex but on the situation of Dilandau. Hard to explain. Unfortunately, I\'m still quite hesitant in reading yaois, so I hope you\'ll forgive me if I haven\'t read your other works and other yaoi stories.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really impressed with this fanfiction! It was so \"in character\" too! WHOOT! This is one of my favorite fanfics on this site, and i realised i hadn\'t reviewed it yet and was taken aback by my own stupidity. So now I review and tell you this is a GREAT fanfic! And now I\'m going off to reread it ^^
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this.It was soooo sweet and loveable with all the seductiveness(is that even a word! XD) thrown into it.Great awesome job.You must write more like this. *-*
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I likey!Is that it?!O_O....I want more!X3....email me if u add more please.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, review junkie, here ya go:
Overall: OMGOMGOMGOMG more please!!!!
But, a few stylistic comments. Please understand that these are not comments on your writing itself (which is excellent), simply the way that you present it.
This may be a personal peeve, but I'm sure others will agree: try to steer clear of artful "misspellings" like "cum" - there's no reason not to spell it "come", and "cum" tends to lend a less mature, l337 5p34k atmosphere to a fic which is highly distracting if it shows up in an otherwise well written fic.
Secondly, try to find out how adultfanfiction.net posting handles italics. /-------/ is fine, but italics again have a more professional and easy-to-read quality.
Overall: OMGOMGOMGOMG more please!!!!
But, a few stylistic comments. Please understand that these are not comments on your writing itself (which is excellent), simply the way that you present it.
This may be a personal peeve, but I'm sure others will agree: try to steer clear of artful "misspellings" like "cum" - there's no reason not to spell it "come", and "cum" tends to lend a less mature, l337 5p34k atmosphere to a fic which is highly distracting if it shows up in an otherwise well written fic.
Secondly, try to find out how adultfanfiction.net posting handles italics. /-------/ is fine, but italics again have a more professional and easy-to-read quality.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am usually n ofn of Dilly n' the Dragonslayers...but this is FABULOUS!! ^_^ Please post more because it seems like it will be a GREAT story! I love stories in which Dilandau's true ,softer nature is revealed and *maybe* embraced! Then again, I always enjoy what I call Dillyrotica...Yay! Dilly smut! Mmmm...Dilandau...It's a shame he turns into a girl...especially such a silly girl who eats snails EW!
P.S. Keep postin and I'll keep reviewin'!
P.S. Keep postin and I'll keep reviewin'!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice start... I hope for more soon!!! *blink blink*