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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's only one paragraph...
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay where\'s the rest of it! :P
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi. maybe its just me or something but i only see 1 paragraph while the others apparently read the whole thing, found out by the reviews, i was wondering why this is like this and if you could send me a copy or fix whatever is wrong with the site. thank you.
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this was great! Very nice interplay between Vash & Meryl. He\'s such a sweet little hottie in this story--you get two thumbs up from me! :)
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Favorite line ever: \" Meryl sighed. Vash accidentally walking into her room like this almost felt like the beginnings of some dirty story. Coughing and blushing, she just as quickly dismissed the idea.\"
Alas, I have no cabana boys to give you, but, um, yay! I really, really liked how you worked Vash and Meryl\'s personalities. They stayed in character, and it was absolutely stupendous. Erm...there isn\'t any hope for some more of this, is there? *hopehopepleadbeg*
Alas, I have no cabana boys to give you, but, um, yay! I really, really liked how you worked Vash and Meryl\'s personalities. They stayed in character, and it was absolutely stupendous. Erm...there isn\'t any hope for some more of this, is there? *hopehopepleadbeg*
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, I totally forgot this one bit, and then I\'ll go away. Vash when he was talking about him being the only outlaw to run around spouting about love and peace, and then reflexivelossiossing his fingers was an awesome quirk for his character. I think that was one of the bits thate the this peice so believeable and stupendous. Rock on, yo.
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! Extremely good! I loved it! The summary led me to belive, that Meryl was offering herself to Vash, but the way you had ti was great and in character, except for all the out of character stuff, lol. ^_~ Although, the whole Vash trying to figure out how to get rid of her was sad, the mood was just so romantic! My only thing about it is that how would Meryl react to seing Vash\'s body all scarred up? Even if she had already seen it, it is still something you notice. But, if I missed it when I read, sorry! ^.^;
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Verah nice! I enjoyed it a whole bunch! It was the first Trigun fan-fic I\'d ever read! Whooo!
~Ami
~Ami
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really great.
Though it threw me that you didn\'t have Vash\'s scarring and everything there. Meryl might have thought twice abou it but it would have added a nice angle. Also, I love the angst. It\'s so Vash. Drool... Him caring so much and beio seo sensitive is one of his character traits I love the most.
I also enjoyed how it actually was IC. Hehehehe.
Ace job. Bravo!
Though it threw me that you didn\'t have Vash\'s scarring and everything there. Meryl might have thought twice abou it but it would have added a nice angle. Also, I love the angst. It\'s so Vash. Drool... Him caring so much and beio seo sensitive is one of his character traits I love the most.
I also enjoyed how it actually was IC. Hehehehe.
Ace job. Bravo!