rate_review Reviews

Over all, you have a great grasp of how making people care about the characters and what awaits them. You keep the reader hooked and though it should be the usual thing, I rarely find this in FF anymore, so this is a very welcomed treat. The pace is right, not too fast, not too slow, and the alternating POV is a great thing for character development and insight into their minds. Personally, more than action, that's what really interest me in stories. To know what the characters think, why, how they feel. I'm very intrigued now to know how this will follow...

please, for your dear life, follow the fic U_U or at least tell me if it is complete in other web

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Excellent plot, great vocabulary and grammar and no overusage of adverbs (a pet peeve of mine). Your writing really flows, no breaks or skips. Even though I don\'t know the characters, you make them real by describing their inner turmoil. Great work. Keep it up.

Snowfall

Please please update soon!!!!

Must have more please! This is very well written. You really captured both their characters well!^_^

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I have to admit I wonder what goes on in that head of yours. Russia? Oh lord, this can't be good. Alright, I admit it I'm hooked. I'm gonna be watchin for the rest of the chapters. By the way, you will be fillin us in on why the villagers were so 'warm and friendly' later on right?

This is my first read through, but the story's very interesting so far. The alternating POV's help a lot. I hope to see more soon.