schedule
May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe...I wanna see more! I didn't really think that I'd like this, but I do. It's...*giggles* cute!
schedule
October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..this is ok..but this self insertion could use a little more work. Try adding more spaces between paragraphs and proper capitalization, and perhaps grammar. the Vash/Tersa thing..isn't really working out for me.