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OMG I SAW THAT COMING wow...im luffy

Hey I just decided to add a different idea

Sanji is constently doing everything for luffy, and when zolo confrunts sanji at dinner asking why, Sanji looks at luffy,

well thats my idea

I Hope you keep writing your reall briliant.

Hey Read the post here s an idea

Zolo and luffy try out the new mattress
A Week Later Luffy's mood swings drive zolo to drink. Sanji finds him drunk and thinks Luffy deserves better. Sanji gets up enough courage to tell Luffy the truth, and to tell him to leave Zolo for him, Sanji then kisses luffy, Luffy punches sanji, and doesn't speak to him. Sanji is heart broken Luffy feals Guilty and tries to apologize which leads to a big mistake.

First of all......... WOW.
Secondly, you need to continue.
This story is weird and crazy- but perfect.
It makes sense (in the One Piece sense of the word).

PLEASE. I'M BEGGING ON MY HANDS AND KNEES!!!

See, see someone agrees with me! Ace needs to show up and get with Sanji and be all big brother to Luffy and make-out with Sanji and be all crazy over protective and well you get the point. ^^

Mmmmm~~... *considers dragging her to the street* You know what? that won't do, because I NEED to find out how this story finishes @_@ although i'm not that much into male pregnancy. I have re-read the last posted chapter, and the issues between Zoro and Luffy seemed kind of solved. I think time and a little conversation would settle it, I was thinking maybe getting Sanji in between that, but it looks useless (he's not an ass when things are serious).
So here are some ideas, I made small lists of how a situation can develop:

1- Sanji getting all supportive and corny stuff with Luffy.
2- Zoro going ballistic after seeing this.
3- Zoro getting in a serious fight (you know, katanas, kicks and blood and "super pissed" glares) with Sanji.
4- Zoro and Sanji still pissed, but Luffy comes to the rescue.

1- Zoro and Luffy solving their current dilemma (Zoro being kind of pissed yet)
2- Sanji butting in (i don't know how, figure out from other readers @_@)
3- Zoro supporting Luffy's following months of pregnancy

1- After solving their issues, they encounter some enemy
2- Luffy gets all pissy (he is emotional in this state) and wants to fight.
3- Before they can stop him, he gets kicked on the tummy.
4- Baby dies. (just kidding XD <--- i'm sick)
4- Zoro gets super pissed and slaughters all enemy on sight.
5- Luffy gets happy because of Zoro's berserk mode.
6- Something happens after that (check other lists)

1- Sanji throwing in Zoro's face his lack of support.
2- Zoro gets all angtsy and thus avoids Luffy.
3- Luffy gets teary and goes to Sanji.
4- Sanji considers using this opportunity to woo at Luffy but holds back.

It's kind of hard to make something original, mainly because right now everything revolves around Zoro being not that supportive, which is getting solved through LOVE~ (it is kind of obvious from the last two chapters) So now you could focus on Luffy's pregnancy months, making go through the whole ordeal. Or, you can add an unimportant enemy of sorts... (i suck writing stories)

*continues last post* half my post got deleted... *sigh*

4- Zoro gets super pissed and slaughters all enemies on sight.
5- Zoro gets all mushy with Luffy. Sanji glares at him with a *now you're getting all possessive you hypocrite*
6- work it out from there

1- Sanji confronts Zoro throwing at his face his lack of support, which gets at Zoro.
2- Zoro avoids Luffy feeling guilty
3- Luffy gets al teary and looks for Sanji for a shoulder to cry on.
4- Sanji considers this opportunity to try to woo Luffy, but holds back.
5- work it out from there.

Right now all is revolving around Zoro's reluctance about the pregnancy, which is getting resolved (you can see it in the last two chapters), plus it's kind of difficult to put Sanji in between... But I agree with one of the posters, Ace SHOULD make an appearance; first to get angry at Luffy (we all know why) and then beating some sense in Zoro (if it isn't already done). After all, he IS the big brother, he should feel protective towards his baby brother. go write something along these lines.

I want Ace to show up...and if you really love me, have him fall for Sanji. Later Sanji falls for Ace too and yaoi goodness. ^-^

Meanwhile, Zoro is having a hard time with not being able to do stuff with Luffy, sex wise, well he can but he's afaird of hurting Luffy and/or the baby, after the thrid month. Chopper has lost his mind trying to figure out how the baby is going to born. Usopp is trying to baby proff everything. Nami has gone nuts at thought of being 'anuty' and Robin is the only sane one.

That sounds like fun to me. Take some or none I don't really care, but you wanted help, so yeah.

Hope your able the update now, please

Love
Ebby

this is kind a hard story to write, dont ya think? cos zoro already accepted luffy's choice.. and well. what more is there to say?! shit.. i don't have any ideas.. *its cos i am a SanZo fan*.. just try to give it a happy endign or so..

*pouts* hey, you know what? I\'m in college too and i found a way to help me have more free time. I actually use a schedule. Maybe this can help you out a bit... and let me read some more of this fic ^^
have fun at college and update when you can!