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for One day in April

by Yaoilady

person -----
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luffy pragnant?
Thats just too funny!!!
When is chapter 3 going to be done?
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, a baby? o.o
But do continue, I\'d like to see how this turns out.
person Chagrin
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How cuuute. I always thought that this the-little-uke-gets-pregnant stories are very stupid, but you actually made a quiet nice plot. And again...it\'s very cuuute.X3
person kyou
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome continue your great work
person XxMaster-ExX
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Luffy, big, bad Zoro was being mean to him because he has a short fuse and was about to die from shock. But it's okay, Luffy! Onee-chan is always here for you~~ (Zoro: Idiot.) Or you can always go to Sanji! I'm sure he'd "comfort" you~~ (Zoro: NO!!)
person TenshiKaitou
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww, the ending was sweet! i love it...please update soon
person Li-chan
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Zoro gonna be a daddy!!xD
UPDATE SOON!!
Can't wait to his reaction when he finds out!!
x3 x3 x3 x3
person Lint
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You've really got a talent.

I NEVER write reviews on fanfics... But this one is something special. Your use of words, the build of the emotions and details, not to mention how you easily mold the personalitieso soo something believable.. It is just so awesome. Not to mention the male pregnancy. I don't think I can describe how much I love male pregnancy. (Kind of a weird obsession of mine) I can totally picture Lubeinbeing a 'mommy'.

I am going to share the link to this story because it is just so awesome and it has to be read.
person TenshiKaitou
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Bulged eyes) Whoa, that's a really fresh and interesting concept. lol. please continue writing more.
person Jane Silver
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O god Pleace let Zoro love luffy enough that they stay together! I love Zoro/Luffy stories. but then again how would our dear cook get hooked up with the captain. Maybe you could have it three way relationship. but I don't think thats what you have in mind. just pleace don't have Zoro abandon Luffy, Maybe you could have zoro die defending Luffy.

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