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I LOVE IT!!!

Ha~~~!

It's so them~!

I even love and enjoy the fact that Tessa know what happened between Sousuke and Kaname~ Hee~

I want her to be green with envy~

-Insert evil laugh-

This is awesome man, please keep on writing!

you need to write more..you cant leave it at where it is! please?! :pouts:

This story no doubt the best I've seen in this site or any other site, for that matter! Congratulations! Not only did you keep grammar and spelling errors close to nothing, but the story was also incredible! Your descriptive abilities are very creative, funny at times even, but most importantly easy to follow.

But above anything else, the "Lemon" scene was pretty incredible. I find myself reading it repeatedly and believe that it is by far the best, most incredible, sexiest work I've come across. It's loving, yet sexy and Kinky at the same time... not too dirty, not too mushy... just perfect! I just wish I could see more of your Sousuke x Kaname work.

All in all: Perfect! keep up the great work!

Such a great story. Is there going to be a sequel or another chapter? If so, then please email me when you do. Thanks.

Great story! You do an awesome job with Sousuke's character, well with all of them, actually. You cracked me up a few times. When Sousuke panicked about the kiss hehehehe. 'she made oral contact' I believe was the wording you used, OMG it was priceless!

Okay nuh-uh! Y;ou cannot leave it like that!! Not when youve set it up so perfectly for a continuation!!!! Btw loved the whole thing. Lol and I write a lot too, so I never notice the technical errors......I make a lot of them!

<3 Sadie <3

Wow. This was really good; one of the best FMP Panic fics i've read, and definately the best one on this site. It's nice to read something by an author that's actually talented. Anyway, I thought you did a very good job. The characters were in character, the writing itself was near perfect, and the sex scene was very well done. The whole piece had a very good feel to it.

thanks for writing this story. :] ive been looking for a GOOD, tasteful sousuke/kaname lemon for a long long time. hah, but really?! must you bring in evil-doers at the very end? -sigh- i guess that's just how these things go..

What a wonderful fic!!! I love your characterizations of the two, they were spot on! And, haha Tessa got hers!! (Sorry I dislike Tessa A LOT) Are you planning to write a sequel to this? It seems like you set up for one. Please do!!! :D