rate_review Reviews

Absolutely amazing! I was almost too embarrassed to upload my FMP fic after reading yours! It was like, what's the point? Anyway, awesome job!

You're FIRST fanfic? AND your first lemon? You're kidding me, right? ... This was amazing! I never expected to find an FMP! fic that was so completely in character, so utterly believable...and a lemon one at that! I am beyond impressed! I have never read a lemon so thoroughly researched; you made perfectly certain to cover every single base before allowing the characters to become sexually involved. That shows great skill as an author, and an amazing understanding and respect for the material AND the characters! You put them in a situation that was believable and that we, the readers, could feel for, as well as providing them with the proper motivations, materials, and state of mind in order to do so. That there is one of the reasons that I have never completed or posted a lemon of my own--it is soooo incredibly hard to reach all of those standards when manipulating characters not your own, and I myself would hate to post anything less. I have the utmost respect for you for being able to attain this level of writing.

Thank you so much for such a WONDERFUL, well-written, pulse-racing read! I really hope you are considering (or will) writing more about Sousuke and Kaname in the future--there is so little truly well-written fanfiction out there on this wonderful pair, and you are one of the very few who seems capable of doing them justice. Keep up the outstanding work!

i liked it. was chapter six the last chapter? i hope it wasnt i like where you could go with this. so please continue.

oh my god! awesome very detailed and their very into character. i usually dont review but this fic was that good! nice lemon cake, too! wheres the sequel, you are going to write on right? if you dont i may need to inform u that im ditintly related to a mithril agent and now how to use grenades! jk~

Wow! This is the best FMP story I have read yet, and the most faithful to the show. All of the characters and events were believable and interesting. I would love to see more from you along the same lines. I am definitely interested in a sequel as well.

First of all let me just write that your character comparison to the comic and show is very good! Nothing makes a fanfic better than a fanfic that has characters just the ones in the show! and your going to write a sequel right? You\'d better because I just love your writing style!!

OMG how could you...dang it....oi...I give up. T_T more keep going...Ur scaring me with that ending *hides*

this was really nice! I liked it alot. The ending was a bit odd as I did not think you were continuing the story but the ending seems like it will. Whatever. Nice lemon.

My goodness. I loved this story so much because it had a plot, it had grammar, it was probably the best fic I\'ve read here to date. That being said there were a few moments that needed a beta due to a missing word or a grammar issue. I would love to read the story unfolding at the end. That sounds like quite a tale! Please feel free to continue...because I would love to read that story too. Call me greedy. Otherwise you should be proud of the story you told. Well done!

*squee* I\'m a newer fan to FMP!, but I love it and have seen the series as well as most of the Fumoffu; and I\'ve started collecting the manga as well. You\'ve done a very good job with this fic, from the characters, to dialogue, to scenes - everything! ^_^ Of course, Gauron *would* have to show up and pose a threat to Kaname! *grr* Are you going to continue this in another fic??? Please e-mail me if you do!!!