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for I Couldn't Move On

by Elvy

person Annoyance
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a pretty good fanfiction but I feel sorry for Tessa. She barely ever gets Sagara. Could you please make another one that has Tessa win his heart?
person Lynne
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Very in character, very sweet, and just the right amount of lemon. :) I\'m impressed, especially since this is your first fic. I hope you\'ll be writing some more FMP! fanfiction, there certainly isn\'t enough of it. Great job!
person dark_Angel
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was awesome =D you portrayed Chidori and Sousuke so well, and it was really funni =)
How about writing one with Mao and Kurz? *evil grin*
person Kinnara
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*looks at email address* It means Hell. Like the fic cuz you make them sound so into character, but you made Kurz more of a dumbass than usual...brilliant! And Souseke, in his usual militay-mode. God, how can he be so DENSE?! Love it. *tries to hug author* I wish I could, but I don\'t know you... Keep on writing!
person reene
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice job. I love how you wrote this; everyone was very in-character. It was funny, romantic, and the lemon was seductively sweet. This has to be the best SXK fic I\'ve ever read.
person silverose
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and i see that you left it open for a sequel. I would love to see a sequel
person Mic123
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, a very indepfth story, keeps you interested through out, nice going, write more on this ok? if not another chapter, mabey a sequil to it would sufice lol but exelently done
person Alas
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* OH MY KAMI-SAMA! That was so friggin good! I laughed, 'aww'ed, cried, got horny, and feel in love with Full Metal Panic all over again! I loved the chemistry that sizzled in this fic! Very well planned, written, and plotted. The love scene could even be considered a masterpiece! Beautiful!

-Alas
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!! you are gonna write a sequel aren't you? please *puppy dog eyes*
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!

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