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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update. You can\'t just leave me hanging!! I love this couple and you\'ve done a great job of keeping them in character. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was pretty good. althoug it would be better in the next chapter to have aoshi and misao action. but other that that it was good. please update soon^_^
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to know what happens so pleas update soon
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic with excellent plot! Do continue!!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you\'re trying too hard with this. You\'re trying to make your writing sound sophisticated with big words that i\'m not sure you know how to use properly. I also think that you should read over your writing to make sure your sentences have correct grammar. This is not a flame. I haven\'t said anything negative and I haven\'t said anything that, in my opinion, isn\'t true. I hope that you don\'t take this as a flame because like I said before, it\'s not. Don\'t be offended. This is just some advise. You can choose whether to take it or not.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* good story btw